Suburban Sunflower

Suburban Sunflower

The moment that she bit

deep into her

ripe city peach like that ..

Was the very

same moment, he closed

both his eyes

and imagined handfuls of

apricots and a

single suburban sunflower ..

It was also

then that he realised it was

raining, he was

no longer starving, but yet

still hungry

for a small portion of her ..

 

 

Author's Note

I have just returned from Brazil and still feel jet lagged and sleep deprived I shall respond to all previous reviews and correspondences when my brain is re-engaged .. in the meantime, I would seriously recommend crossing the equator on your birthday and visiting Rio .. it shouldn't be too long .. for a few reasons that are now becoming known to me, I don't get so very many these days .. Neville :)

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

Peaches and apricots. So very fruity. Deliciously sensual. Welcome back Neville. Sunflowers plant smiles on the faces of those who look their way. .

Chris

[Neville]

I no longer think I am invisible since it seems you can see write through me .. however, thanking you is easy .. Neville

[Chris Shaw]

The rain and the hunger found me with the homeless. Hope your jet lag goes soon. Unlike my insomnia who has sworn never to leave me:)

[Neville]

Good mane our Chris, it did rain in Rio and while visiting a few of the many Favelas & surrounding areas .. yet despite everything and including the more than obvious extent of homelessness, I also found beauty .. No point me telling you to get your head down then ..

Seasonal best to you and yours my friend. Neville

[Ken Simm.]

Congrats on visiting Rio and this is a lovely sunny poem. Romantic in the extreme.

[Neville]

thank you Ken .. muchly appreciated sir .. and yes the leisurely cruise was something else 20 days to get there & only a mere 12 hours flying back .. AGT's,

Neville

[willweb]

Welcome back and because of this beauty WELCOME BACK!!! Wow, I really like this.

[Neville]

How very kind, thank you so very much Will .. Neville