Shadowbright

Shadowbright

 

she had such a way

with words .. indeed, she did make

   

darkness shine so bright ..

Reviews

[Betty Hermelee]

A short piece with a lot of punch! some people just walk into a room and the whole aura lights up....but she, in fact, had to say the most provocative words to make this happen; I can picture this in my mind....what kind of words did she speak to arouse such attention???? that is the mystery!
Excellent!
Warmly, B

[Neville]

you got it Betty .. thank you my friend .. and so much .. Best, Neville

[Betty Hermelee]

You're very welcome Neville
Warmly, B

[Light and ashes]

some of us do :))
take care. 💗

[Neville]

thank you so much for stopping by little bubble 💗

[Light and ashes]

:)) .......

[Einstein Noodle]

when the light that guides one's path is darkness ... oooooooooooooooooooooooooo how deep that darkness it ;) stay away from that girl says i! lots of "stuff" in your senryu .. well done!!
E.

[Neville]

Bless you brother E .. Oh' how I wish you'da told me soona :)
N.

[Einstein Noodle]

do like me ... get drunk and say smart things :))))))

[Neville]

......................... down ya neck bro 😎🍺💛👍

[Thomas W Case]

Powerful in its brevity. People can sure leave a lasting impression on us poets.

[Neville]

............ Indeed, indelibly Tom, cheers, Neville

[Arundass TP]

I love that words darkness shine. Good work 👍

[Neville]

Thank you so much my friend .. Neville

[Patricia Wedel]

A dusty poem that deserves a place on a Shelf in between other well loved poems in Books.. 📚 many a feathered friend may surprise you… softly, Pat

[Neville]

if the truth were known, I am rarely surprised these days Pat .. but I thank you regardless and as gently as always .. Neville

[Stella Armour]

Lovely little senryu style poem Neville.
She stole your heart clean away with poetic phrases then ?

[Neville]

she had a mouth on her that could make a docker blush and talked more dirty than the bottom of a dustbin .. them old tin one's we used to have .. ta S .. N

[Stella Armour]

oh, a fishwife then .... you never said :)

[Neville]

.............................. you neva asked :)

[Stella Armour]

True ...... :)

[Chris Shaw]

Very few people have that ability to turn darkness in to light. That is a gift. When we meet them, they aren’t likely to be forgotten. This is written in the past tense, so I believe this to be a tribute to someone special. A lovely piece of brevity Neville.

Chris

[Neville]

.. absolutely spot on Chris .. thank you👍