Rank Order

if you are passing through, as indeed, I know you do .. maybe just think about it .. long and hard ..

Rank Order

Don’t think for one moment

 you might be second best ..

 

 That would be, ridiculous ..

 

Since you were by no means

  whatsoever, that high up the list ..

 

 

Author's Note

I imagine she would deny it for ever .. but regardless of that, the truth will live on ..

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

Well, well, well

That will be three holes in the ground then Neville.

The pauses work so well here. That last couplet is a killer.

I would say you are a master here of the put down. Perfectly executed. I’ve always been a back of the queue girl myself:) And written about it too:)

Chris

[Neville]

I do try .. mostly on behalf of the underdog .. cheers Chris .. and I know .. Neville

[Chris]

Chuckling here, THAT was "Evil" Neville - pure evil... but so real!

[Neville]

it seems you can see write through me Chris .. but then, I aim to be transparent .. somethings just have to be said don't they ... thank you so very bloomin much for indulging e this cold December mane .. Stay warm & safe good sir .. Neville

[Matthew Kult]

Keep them in line. Especially if they are getting a big head.

Great read

With love

Matthew

[Neville]

Where there was once queue upon queue, today there is a damp grey stain on the floor directly behind me .. but I do sincerely thank you for trying to cheer me up .. Seasons Best Matt .. Neville

[John the Baptist]

By God, N., you take no prisoners. Might be safer in the UK, though. The chick probably won't be carrying.

[Neville]

thanks John but sadly, the times they are a changing.

[Patricia Wedel]

Self esteem is reckless and never rests... until it is covered with Earth, or scattered on the High Seas for Eternity. Be at Peace. gently, Pat

[Neville]

I am at peace Pat & gently so .. or are you by chance wishing me dead ..

[Stella Armour]

ooooh, sarcastic today ...

[Neville]

I may be many things, I may not be many other things, but I am proud of my integrity and always try to be honest .. and every now and then, sarcasm as I am sure young lady comes in very handy ..