Rank Order

Rank Order

A Poem by Neville
"

if you are passing through, as indeed, I know you do .. maybe just think about it .. long and hard ..

"

Rank Order



Don’t think for one moment


 you might be second best ..


 

 That would be, ridiculous ..

 


Since you were by no means


  whatsoever, that high up the list ..

 

 

© 2023 Neville


Author's Note

Neville

I imagine she would deny it for ever .. but regardless of that, the truth will live on ..

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Featured Review

Well, well, well

That will be three holes in the ground then Neville.

The pauses work so well here. That last couplet is a killer.

I would say you are a master here of the put down. Perfectly executed. I’ve always been a back of the queue girl myself:) And written about it too:)

Chris





Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

2 Years Ago


I do try .. mostly on behalf of the underdog .. cheers Chris .. and I know .. Neville



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Chuckling here, THAT was "Evil" Neville - pure evil... but so real!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

2 Years Ago


it seems you can see write through me Chris .. but then, I aim to be transparent .. somethin.. read more
Keep them in line. Especially if they are getting a big head.

Great read

With love

Matthew

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

2 Years Ago


Where there was once queue upon queue, today there is a damp grey stain on the floor directl.. read more
By God, N., you take no prisoners. Might be safer in the UK, though. The chick probably won't be carrying.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

2 Years Ago


thanks John but sadly, the times they are a changing.
Self esteem is reckless and never rests... until it is covered with Earth, or scattered on the High Seas for Eternity. Be at Peace. gently, Pat

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

2 Years Ago


I am at peace Pat & gently so .. or are you by chance wishing me dead ..
ooooh, sarcastic today ...

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

2 Years Ago


I may be many things, I may not be many other things, but I am proud of my integrity and alw.. read more
Well, well, well

That will be three holes in the ground then Neville.

The pauses work so well here. That last couplet is a killer.

I would say you are a master here of the put down. Perfectly executed. I’ve always been a back of the queue girl myself:) And written about it too:)

Chris





Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

2 Years Ago


I do try .. mostly on behalf of the underdog .. cheers Chris .. and I know .. Neville

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Added on December 20, 2023
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Neville

Gone West folks....., United Kingdom



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