Lavished

Lavished

A Poem by Neville

Lavished

 


Here, where all my prime colours


are almost spent


and pastels lay abundant but in


  complete disarray ..


I crouch in the shadows and shade


awaiting the pleasure


I imagine your brush stroke shall


  eventually deliver ..

 

© 2024 Neville


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This isn’t about painting at all is it? It’s about lurve? The canvas of you is waiting patiently to be lavished with tlc. Lol,
there’s me thinking you’ve taken up your brushes again:) There’s me thinking you are about to paint a canvas, when all along you are the empty canvas. Now that is some creative bloomin thinking there. Wot a metaphor. Full of surprises. Always more between the lines. Read below the surface she says to herself.



Chris



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Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

1 Year Ago


You have such an uncanny knack of seeing write through me Chris. Thank you for that gift .. .. read more
Chris Shaw

1 Year Ago

I hope you get splattered with love and affection Neville. Blank canvasses are boring:)
Neville

1 Year Ago


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Beautiful symbolism and metaphor. Powerful work.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

1 Year Ago


that'll do nicely, have a good day .. Neville
This isn’t about painting at all is it? It’s about lurve? The canvas of you is waiting patiently to be lavished with tlc. Lol,
there’s me thinking you’ve taken up your brushes again:) There’s me thinking you are about to paint a canvas, when all along you are the empty canvas. Now that is some creative bloomin thinking there. Wot a metaphor. Full of surprises. Always more between the lines. Read below the surface she says to herself.



Chris



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Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

1 Year Ago


You have such an uncanny knack of seeing write through me Chris. Thank you for that gift .. .. read more
Chris Shaw

1 Year Ago

I hope you get splattered with love and affection Neville. Blank canvasses are boring:)
Neville

1 Year Ago


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This is more clever than it first appears Neville.
Prime to middle age and beyond then the hues of grey appear.
And hoping some creative lady will see the potential still there and enhance it all back to at least most of its prime ..

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Stella Armour

1 Year Ago

well i don't know what one looks like .....so long since i ;ve seen one i 've forgotten.
Neville

1 Year Ago


that's such a criming shame in the making ..
Stella Armour

1 Year Ago

same goes for traffic wardens , you can park anywhere you like illegally where i live in lawless Rot.. read more

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Added on January 16, 2024
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Neville
Neville

Gone West folks....., United Kingdom



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Sometimes my imagination get's the better of me and then the pen takes over .. more..