Again Upon Reflection

some might call this a love poem ..

Again Upon Reflection

 

Somewhere,

mid the seemingly

awkward flow

of all these

tumbling words ..

If you look

long enough upon

an old mirror

and then,

you listen hard ..

You may just

find a love poem,

so much

beauty and indeed,

the very

source of their

original inspiration ..  

 

Author's Note

but don't feel obliged, you don't have to ..

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

Well I took your advice and I looked long and hard at the reflection. For a moment the unbrushed hair and the tired eyes from a sleepless night softened. The birds were singing in the birch, the sky is blue and I smiled. This poem is as uplifting as any I have known. Beautiful work Neville. Good sunny day to you.

Chris

[Neville]

I am more than merely gobsmacked by the kindness you have heaped upon my humble little scribble this cold but sunny day Chris .. thank you so much .. Neville

[John Sullivan]

Life has it's struggles, but the beauty is real.

[Neville]

we just have to look for it don't we .. and listen & feel .. cheers John .. Neville

[Thomas W Case]

You nailed this one. Great work.

[Neville]

thank Tom I hammer most grateful to you sir ..

Neville