Gaia’s Secret Garden

Gaia’s Secret Garden

I feel like playing

god again

in Gaia’s garden ..

Surrounded

by rainbows and then

dancing

like a candle flame ..

Twisted

and bowed

caught in the draught

of her most

recent of departures .. 

I want to 

break the rules again, 

then lay 

exhausted for a lifetime 

upon the mound 

of Gaia’s secret garden .. 

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

Mother Nature, right up there. Goddess Gaia she is, regardless of the season of the year. Rain or shine, hot or cold she deserves attention and respect. This is a lovely tribute to the natural environment Neville and you have a metaphor thrown in for added measure. Lovely job.

Chris

[Neville]

thank you our Chris, .. what else is a meta phor eh' :)

Neville

[John the Baptist]

Better hurry, N., before it's deforested.

[Neville]

would that happen to be in any way due to microclimate change .. they do say change is as good as a rest, don't they sir John.

[Thomas W Case]

Subtle sensuality. Beautiful work my friend.

[Neville]

Cheers Thomas 👍

[Einstein Noodle]

"caught in the draught
of her most
recent of departures .. " twisting and flicking .. ooooooo! subtle, delightful .. mighty strong metaphors sir ... enjoyed a lot!
E.

[Neville]

thanks a million Gene I am so glad you dropped by .. Hope you are well my friend & that 2024 is being kind to you .. Neville

[Einstein Noodle]

so far so good my friend! Back at ya!

[Light and ashes]

beautifully written, nice job.

[Neville]

Many thanks indeed L&A .. so very muchly appreciated .. Neville