kirei ni tsukurowa re te iru

kirei ni tsukurowa re te iru

 

When he found her

she was lost

      

and so very broken ..

Yet she

wanted him to mend

   her badly ..

Indeed, so much she

   begged him

and that my friend is

precisely

what he did, with so

much care

and love and such

attention, plus

half a dozen lengths

of finest

and most precious

   golden thread ..

Then when

she was whole again

and more

 

  beautiful than ever ..

She did lay

before him naked for

the first time

and agreed to take her

saviours name

  

   kiseki no souzou mono ..

 

 

Reviews

[Thomas W Case]

Wow, beautiful story, I hope she appreciated it.

[Neville]

thanks Tom :)

[Ken Simm.]

Interesting. Not sure of the meaning but well put together withal.

[Neville]

Arigato then Ken .. Neville