When it Gets That Bad it Must be Broken

When it Gets That Bad it Must be Broken

A Poem by Neville

When it Gets That Bad it Must be Broken



Had it not happened


when it happened


and how, when


and where that it did ..


Then you would


not be aware of just


how bad it can get


in a matter of seconds ..


In fact, it can get so bad


it might just as well be broken ..

 

 

© 2024 Neville


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I dunno. You do like to set brain teasers. Seconds can make a huge difference. My mind travelled to the three American troops who were killed by a drone and the thirty five left with brain injuries. Something clearly broken in our world. It doesn’t take long to kill people does it ?

Chris



Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

1 Year Ago


it can take as long as it takes to push a single button our Chris .. frightening aint it .. .. read more
Chris Shaw

1 Year Ago

It sure is. Seconds and the aftermath is devastating, and look who is in charge of pressing those b.. read more
Neville

1 Year Ago


I daren't look Chris & I fear there might be another ego maniac back on the scene before too.. read more



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I like to think it gets better, governments and politicians be damned. Anyways, a fine write!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

1 Year Ago


I used to think like that .. still do about politicians and governments .. thanks for indulg.. read more
I dunno. You do like to set brain teasers. Seconds can make a huge difference. My mind travelled to the three American troops who were killed by a drone and the thirty five left with brain injuries. Something clearly broken in our world. It doesn’t take long to kill people does it ?

Chris



Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

1 Year Ago


it can take as long as it takes to push a single button our Chris .. frightening aint it .. .. read more
Chris Shaw

1 Year Ago

It sure is. Seconds and the aftermath is devastating, and look who is in charge of pressing those b.. read more
Neville

1 Year Ago


I daren't look Chris & I fear there might be another ego maniac back on the scene before too.. read more
Makes me think of Pearl Harbor.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

1 Year Ago


and why not .. the similarities are all too obvious
Beautifully written. Painfully true.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

1 Year Ago


how dreadfully kind .. bless you Shaley .. Neville
wrong time, wrong place for it to happen then Neville ...

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

1 Year Ago


sometimes maybe is the nearest approximation to the truth .. perhaps ..

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Added on January 28, 2024
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Neville
Neville

Gone West folks....., United Kingdom



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Sometimes my imagination get's the better of me and then the pen takes over .. more..