Just a Few Odd Diary Notes

Just a Few Odd Diary Notes

A Poem by Neville

Just a Few Odd Diary Notes


 

Each of the following brief notes


was covertly removed from the

   

long diary of a very short lived man ..


 

   Seafood and eat it ..

   

See her and run like hell ..

   

Seasons we must be getting older ..

 


   Now surely, two out of three aint bad ..


But then, at the end of the day,

   

who’s counting ..

 

 

 

© 2024 Neville


Author's Note

Neville

many of you won't get this .. and only a few will try .. but it doesn't really matter ..

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What I got from this was time is short, bad times make one run or could be a nagging wife
And seasons as short as they are now, impact our aging bodies be it heat or cold. Time is too short to be wasted that’s for sure.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

1 Year Ago


I quite agree sir .. never waste a drop of it .. cheers, N.
I love this very expressive poem. Excellent lines. Good work friend

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

1 Year Ago


Thank you kindly my kind friend .. Neville
Arundass TP

1 Year Ago

You are welcome friend 😊
Well, I did get the first two. Probably should have waited until the merlot wore off.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

1 Year Ago


I just knew i could count on you sir John t B. N.
Fortune Cookie 🥠 for the glass is half-empty group

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

1 Year Ago


thank you Cherrie, both kindly & truly .. Neville
"See" .. well i got lost after that connection lol

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

1 Year Ago


it could be something quite simple .. maybe you just need a broader band Stella .. Good day .. read more
Stella Armour

1 Year Ago

ah, simple things are the best so they say... seeya
Wot a puzzle you are. Even a super sleuth might have trouble with this one. Not that I consider myself one. Two out of three of these are definitely you. The third might be lol. Most definitely original as Thomas has said.

Chris

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

1 Year Ago


That's write, blame him .. Ta our Chris .. Neville
Powerful and very original. Excellent work.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

1 Year Ago


How kind Tom .. Many thanks indeed sir .. Neville
Bad jokes, profundity and romance failed or not. What else could you want?

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

1 Year Ago


one can always beat a bad egg, but not a bad joke or profundity .. and as for romance, well .. read more
Ken Simm.

1 Year Ago

Don't believe you for one minute.

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Added on January 31, 2024
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Neville
Neville

Gone West folks....., United Kingdom



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