Once When She Tasted of Apples

Once When She Tasted of Apples

When she parted those lips of hers like that,

I was reminded of an

orchard that I raided long ago, back in the days

of my misspent youth ..

Then, when her back did arc upwards like that ..

I was directly reminded

of a sweetness, such divinely sun kissed fruits

may impart and how one

might easily get deliriously drunk, from imbibing

upon and then savouring

their delicious and such freshly squeezed juice ..

 

 

Reviews

[Betty Hermelee]

Love the subtleness of this love poem….. every fruit mentioned is a big love of an orchard and how one can get drunk with passion tasting all the fruits that make for a sensual delight…..especially squeezed juice…love how you composed this piece..such great metaphors!
Warmly, B

[Neville]

Thank you so very very much Betty .. & warmly :)

Neville

[Masked writer]

Ohh This is fantastic, It tells a memory in simple words yet very strong imagery..
GOOD JOB
Cheers M.w

[Neville]

You are far too kind M.w but I am not complaining .. Thank you so much .. Neville

[Masked writer]

No worries :)

[John the Baptist]

This one does sound juicy. How long did you squeeze her?

[Neville]

only very briefly, but with respect .. thank you

[Chris Shaw]

How sensual Neville. I thought of all the cider that that is produced in your neck of the woods and then I thought of other things too. Some juicy metaphors here. Happy Sunday to you :)

Chris

[Neville]

hello our Chris .. I missed you .. I hope all is well in your neck o the woods .. and thank you too ..

[Chris Shaw]

What a lovely thing to say. Thank you Neville. All’s good. Just a bit too busy at the moment. 😘

[Stella Armour]

Mmmm, best imagery for late night reading ...

such sensual writing in a golden delicious manner Neville :)

[Neville]

Glad you approve Stella .. Many thanks. Neville

[Ken Simm.]

A childhood or at least young love stroy. I always love those of yours and apples.

[Neville]

Core thanks Ken 🍏👍

[Patricia Wedel]

Whoa… Neville.. so sensual… and I am in the process of propagating two 🍎 🍏 different Apple trees in the Spring after the First Frost….
It all started with Eve…. softly, Pat

[Neville]

You sound adamant about that Pat .. and sweetly .. Neville

[Chris]

Left a smile of understanding behind my eyes.

[Neville]

the eyes have it sir .. cheers Chris :)