Two Sisters

Two Sisters

A Poem by Neville
"

no kidding, this is exactly how it was back in ..

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Two Sisters




Dear lord,


our inadvertent


stumbling


upon those two


novice


sisters, making


love like


that, in the long


grass


at Lourdes ..


All those


many years ago,


was like


something else


wasn’t it ..


And even today,


when


I go back there ..


In my


head at least ..


I think


of them smiling


and sprawled ..


Of course,


I also wonder


what


has become


of them both ..


And where they


might be


today, or what


they are


doing and with


whom ..


After saying


their prayers that is ..


 


 


 


© 2024 Neville


Author's Note

Neville
I follow my own path .. so unless you are absolutely sure, don't bother .. oh' and for what its worth, I've never been back there .. except in my head .. that is .. maybe now after this confession, I can move on to Bangkok or .. 🤍

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The following words are tremendously okay my friend .. but for now and for Gee my old mate I want to say a huge THANK YOU ......... I will be in touch .. Neville

Posted 1 Year Ago


There were a couple of sisters in our school as well and can’t help but sometimes wonder what became of them.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

1 Year Ago


thank heaven .. and perfectly natural in my book :)
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Gee
A sight to behold and never forget :))
I've slept with two sisters but not the holy type, in fact they were more devil than religious.
Hope all is well with you Neville

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

1 Year Ago


Bless you brother Gee .. Yes, I am fine thank you, grandparenthood seems to suit me .. Hope .. read more
Well that would be quite the scene to stumble upon. Those types of situations are quite, shocking, initially but was we grow in maturity we don’t find it as shocking.



Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

1 Year Ago


You couldn't make it up could ya .. Oh' and bless you PB for being the first to dare leave t.. read more
Poetic Beauty

1 Year Ago

You are welcome. I typically go by what pops up in my news feed.

The scene you stumbl.. read more
Neville

1 Year Ago


........................................... cheers :)

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Added on February 12, 2024
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Neville
Neville

Gone West folks....., United Kingdom



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Sometimes my imagination get's the better of me and then the pen takes over .. more..