Three Summers

Three Summers

It was never meant

to be like this ..

It was meant to be

perfect forever ..

And indeed it was,

for three

whole summers ..

Then out of the blue,

she went and she broke it ..

 

 

Reviews

[John Sullivan]

That's a long time for such a sudden break... I've never been lucky in love myself... heartfelt stuff, Nev

[Neville]

Thanks for checking in mate .. just never give up on it .. Promise me that you won't ever give up on love .. Okay .. Neville

[Anita Frader]

Gosh, out of the blue hurts like a b***h because you just didn't see it coming.
💛

[Neville]

True enough .. Thanks Anita .. Neville

[Chris Shaw]

A story of deep loss conveyed in nine lines. Three summers though, is a lot of blue sky before the clouds moved in.
Nothing lasts forever. Everything has an end date. A poignant pen Neville.

Chris

[Neville]

Thanks so very bloomin much our Chris .. Neville

[Poetic Beauty]

Unfortunately life likes to throw hand grenades into the mix sometimes and blow up everything we thought would be

[Neville]

Indeed, such is life and sometimes life can suck .. enjoy it while you can .. Neville

[Poetic Beauty]

We have to take the bliss and happiness when it is there for the enjoying. For life is full of negative and positive energy and moments. We learn to appreciate the magical moments because we have lived negative ones.

[Neville]

I concur ma'am I surely do .. 🤍🍒🍷

[Poetic Beauty]

And as writers if all else fails escape into something more pleasant within our writing 🤣🤣🤣 like we are truly given a choice on what we write about. My inner muse in my brain scream what is going to fill the page lol

[Thomas W Case]

Powerful work, my friend.

[Neville]

It's the truth guv .. I swear

[Ken Simm.]

Three summers. More than a lot. But time is relative to what happens during it. Particularly if she was the one who broke it. Excellent write Neville.

[Neville]

I'll take it .. thanks Ken. Neville