Entres

for those who still get the munchies 🤍

Entres

Look,

can you see how

the sky

appears slow

and so

deliberate ..

Like someone

as yet

undecided

which way to go ..

Yet still,

with so many

monsters

just beginning

to emerge

around midnight

Is it really

any wonder

we are

all so very

hungry by midday ..

 

 

Reviews

[Thomas W Case]

Great imagery and very well crafted. You paint this well.

[Neville]

Thank you kindly Thomas, that'll do nicely. Neville

[Poetic Beauty]

So many monsters…
This makes think of those who are up into the last hours writing, working and so on. The sleeping only a short amount of time and their bodies starving to food, sleep and knowledge. Great description in this piece

[Neville]

I'll take it .. every single bite .. many thanks PB :)

[Poetic Beauty]

You are welcome. It is amazing how different people read a piece and see something else simply because of life’s perspective

[Neville]

Yes, it is absolutely amazing, isn't it :)

[Poetic Beauty]

That it definitely is

[Anita Frader]

I love those opening lines, a sky undecided...

[Neville]

It already feels like its gonna be a fine day .. thank you .. Neville