On Waking Up in Rio

and to think you could have come .. 🤍

On Waking Up in Rio

When we eventually

woke up in Rio,

my hands felt too big

and my feet

looked so very small ..

Until I lifted

my head and I realised ..

We had somehow, fallen

asleep on the way, top to toe ..

 

Author's Note

.. its poetry write .. but its also truth writ .. have a nice day too

Reviews

[Poetic Beauty]

Hmm sounds like falling asleep upside down. Now that would definitely interesting way to wake up, laughing

[Neville]

Feels good to me .. indeed it can be .. you should try it some time .. cheers .. Neville :)

[Poetic Beauty]

Naw I’m afraid I’d have a rather terrible headache lol

[Neville]

Oh' well don't say I neva tried .. N

[Poetic Beauty]

Laughing well I wont

[Ken Simm.]

Tee hee. And I do understand it. And I see your hallmark.

[Neville]

I shall have to do something about that, the last thing I want is to become typecast .. ta for the tip off .. Neville