Advice on Avoiding Pedestals

Advice on Avoiding Pedestals

A Poem by Neville
"

don't ever say that you've not been warned ..

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Advice on Avoiding Pedestals


 

Be sure to avoid all bandwagons


and pedestals my dear,

 

  at all costs and your own peril ..


Don’t worry though,

 

  despite my burning up like this ..


Should I die tonight,


you can bet on all of my bones,


   I won’t go quietly ..


But screaming and kicking with


   all of my might ..

  

I refuse to be that kind of victim ..


I mean a quiet one,


and to become less than nothing


but a small collection

 

  of buried old bones, or white ash,


stuck in a bowl


and displayed, beneath a marital


bed or indeed upon


a mantelshelf somewhere quietly


gathering familial dust


with no hope of resuming any of


my former unfulfilled

 

hopes and quietly unacquired glories ..

So just to be sure then,


avoid bandwagons and all of those


associated pedestals

  

  en route and at all costs, since they


serve no true useful

   
purpose on this sad old earth of ours .. 

© 2024 Neville


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Such sage advice Neville. I am reminded that yesterdays heroes become todays tyrants (well for some anyway). You gave me images of toppled statues. I hate the desecration of art. Surely it should be a history lesson and not wiped out as though it never existed. I have just read Soren’s excellent response. I do like his thinking. I thought of Dylan Thomas here too. Yes, go out with a bang, not a whimper my friend:) I like the idea of scattered ashes. Now that is freedom. Not buried in a plot or kept in a bloody pot:)) Wishing you a very long life:)

Chris

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

1 Year Ago


thanks a million our Chris & back at you my friend :)

Neville



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Such sage advice Neville. I am reminded that yesterdays heroes become todays tyrants (well for some anyway). You gave me images of toppled statues. I hate the desecration of art. Surely it should be a history lesson and not wiped out as though it never existed. I have just read Soren’s excellent response. I do like his thinking. I thought of Dylan Thomas here too. Yes, go out with a bang, not a whimper my friend:) I like the idea of scattered ashes. Now that is freedom. Not buried in a plot or kept in a bloody pot:)) Wishing you a very long life:)

Chris

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

1 Year Ago


thanks a million our Chris & back at you my friend :)

Neville
Band wagons and pedestals seem like the domain of politicians but maybe we could make allowances for religions, news media, universities, science in general well I guess the world has changed or maybe always been this way for it seems that people in general love band wagons and pedestals. A wonderful write in flowing meter and verse. A message that needs to be heard.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

1 Year Ago


I shall most probably wear this smile until my id afternoon tea break at least .. thank you .. read more

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Added on April 15, 2024
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