Wow! The very poignant story of Jessie is very finely penned and expressed. Sadly, Jessie didn't turn her life around! You paint a picture from life's other side for your reader, one which imparts that we need to make careful choices so life is good both to us and for us. A heartbreaking ending, but love lives on! Thank you for sharing. I enjoyed reading this poem, it brought a teardrop down my cheek!
Posted 1 Year Ago
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1 Year Ago
I really can't thank you enough Marie .. many serious thank you's are on their way to you wr.. read more
I really can't thank you enough Marie .. many serious thank you's are on their way to you write now .. Neville
1 Year Ago
Most welcome, Neville and thank you for sharing your amazing poem...
Life is the toughest thing to turn around. I like the way you told the story in a non-chalant tone.
The story is sad but the tone in which it's delivered speaks to how ordinary these tragedies can be/have become.
I am most grateful to you for the visit and for your understanding of how it is for so many .. read more
I am most grateful to you for the visit and for your understanding of how it is for so many .. Neville
I am so pleased you loved Jessie. I have my own Jessie not quite as far gone. All I can wish is that she finds a friend as loving as you. Walking on a knife edge, still with us. You have been there and come out the other side. This is so close to my heart. Saddens me so but so beautifully penned Neville.
Wow! The very poignant story of Jessie is very finely penned and expressed. Sadly, Jessie didn't turn her life around! You paint a picture from life's other side for your reader, one which imparts that we need to make careful choices so life is good both to us and for us. A heartbreaking ending, but love lives on! Thank you for sharing. I enjoyed reading this poem, it brought a teardrop down my cheek!
Posted 1 Year Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
1 Year Ago
I really can't thank you enough Marie .. many serious thank you's are on their way to you wr.. read more
I really can't thank you enough Marie .. many serious thank you's are on their way to you write now .. Neville
1 Year Ago
Most welcome, Neville and thank you for sharing your amazing poem...
Phew!!! Riveting tall Read, hooked me every line, wishing it'd never end! 🙂
Posted 1 Year Ago
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1 Year Ago
Jessie had a heart as big as any planet .. and I did love her so albeit briefly .. thank you.. read more
Jessie had a heart as big as any planet .. and I did love her so albeit briefly .. thank you on her behalf .. Neville