Oh’ to Be Vaporized

this was meant to be a love poem .. 🤍

Oh’ to Be Vaporized

love,

like a vapour both

transient

and passing tends

not to leave

an imprint or scar

to mark

where, but for one

moment,

that it once did rest ..

nor indeed,

give any indication

where,

or in which vague

direction

tis now, so casually

drifting ..

and thus, my dear

friend,

there is also no way

of knowing,

or even of guessing ..

just how

sincerely invested it

may once

have been, long ago ..

indeed,

love like a vapour ..

can be bitter

and twisted, sweet

tasting, or perfumed ..

 

 

Author's Note

Reviews

[Thomas W Case]

Superb. You capture it here before it vaporizes.

[Neville]

Ta .... Thomas ..

[Chris Shaw]

Love is invisible, it is something that is felt. There is no bitter and twisted when it comes to love. How sincerely invested it was will be remembered by those who truly felt its touch, scented and warm.

Chris

[Neville]

You are spot on our Chris .. thanks a bullion .. N :)