Different Measures

Different Measures

A Poem by Neville

Different Measures



I swear it must have been


while laying


there in the dark like that,


just listening to her breathing ..


Maybe an inch


or so out of reach perhaps ..


Yet by no means more


than a single outstretched


arm away ..


When it dawned on me that


time and distance


were both quite distinctly


different measures


and I realised before then ..


Everything else


had been nothing but a sham ..


and I would likely be


content to lay there waiting


for cancer ..


Or indeed, another magnificent


heart attack before


finally being prised away from her ..


 

 

© 2024 Neville


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Home is where the heart is and rightly so. That is how this poem speaks to me. It is a wonderful dedication, and that final line says it all. This poem is a fine measure of the true meaning of love. So very nicely composed Neville.

Chris

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

1 Year Ago


Absolutely, thank you & muchly Chris .. Neville
Excellent and precise, loved the read-feeling.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

1 Year Ago


Bless you Abishai100 .. many thanks indeed .. Neville

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Neville
Neville

Gone West folks....., United Kingdom



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Sometimes my imagination get's the better of me and then the pen takes over .. more..