Eleven and A Half Minutes

 Eleven and A Half Minutes

 

Memories are what remain

of times passed

and since this is irrefutable

I shall bequeath

to you my friend, a few of

   my very own ..

Indeed I have such a need

to fill the silent years

   

with sorries and with prayers ..

Each one for you

  

I owe you that much at least ..

And while there

is no need for accolades or

   compliments ..

When no other words will do

I want you to

   

know I still love you like crazy ..

 

Reviews

[Green]

I can't say what I was expecting exactly but I don't think I was thinking love poem at the beginning; not that it was a bad surprise, I thought it was quite sweet in the end if also touched with a little bit of sadness (maybe I'm just reading too much into it but I definitely felt at least a twinge). Sometimes that's all there is to say though to that person that means so much to us, I love you still and that hasn't changed. Thank you for sharing this with us.

[Neville]

You are far too generous .. I am humbled & honoured Green .. All Good Things, to both you and your pen .. Neville

[Thomas W Case]

Beautiful work. The pain and longing is palpable.

[Neville]

thanks Thomas, I really do appreciate your support .. Neville