Sucker Punched

Sucker Punched

A Poem by Neville

Sucker Punched



After the dream,


reality hit ..


Delivering with it


one hell


of a sucker punch


and simultaneous


knee to the groin ..


It felt like


some kind of


unanaesthetised,


outer body thing ..


A near death


experience perhaps ..


But then,


whatever it was ..


I swear, I shall never


try to touch


her there, ever again ..

© 2024 Neville


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That sounds indeed like one hell of a nightmare. I don’t get those sort of dreams ofeten but my dreams seem so real and are vivid and in color so terrifying when I do.

I tend to dream on the sultry scale most often. Oh what a shock there lol I am fortunate I don’t get bad dreams often.

Great write on how dreams can shake us and I don’t believe touching her there is a good idea!!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

1 Year Ago


Sound advice my friend .. I shall gratefully accept it .. Many thanks indeed .. Neville
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That sounds indeed like one hell of a nightmare. I don’t get those sort of dreams ofeten but my dreams seem so real and are vivid and in color so terrifying when I do.

I tend to dream on the sultry scale most often. Oh what a shock there lol I am fortunate I don’t get bad dreams often.

Great write on how dreams can shake us and I don’t believe touching her there is a good idea!!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

1 Year Ago


Sound advice my friend .. I shall gratefully accept it .. Many thanks indeed .. Neville
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Neville
Neville

Gone West folks....., United Kingdom



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Sometimes my imagination get's the better of me and then the pen takes over .. more..