Thanks for Coming But ..

Thanks for Coming But ..

I don’t need your pity,

or your

sympathy right now ..

But those tears

of yours, sure do look

pretty in the last

of my frayed sunlight ..

And although,

I really could have

used some love

a while back, it’s way

too late

to question what

on earth went wrong

between us ..

So no, I do not need

your pity

or your sympathy

right now ..

But thank you so very

much for coming ..

I am certain though

there will be others,

who are

more than grateful

and even

mightily impressed ..

I just wish things

had been different ..

So goodbye,

my dear friend and

with much love

and respect, I now

truly wish you

and yours, all the best ..

 

 

 

Reviews

[Arundass TP]

I felt like attaching broken branches again. An ocean of feelings I see in this poem. Good writing

[Neville]

You are far too kind my friend .. Thank you ever so much .. Neville