Outsiders

Outsiders

A Poem by Neville

Outsiders



Nowhere, is as cold as here,


nor as vast,


yet with no place to hide,


or to shelter


from all of this preventable


fallout, indeed


we are hopeless outsiders ..


Somewhat


fragile and inextricably lost ..

 

 

© 2024 Neville


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This reminds me of some devastation….. it could be something horrible like a bomb strike, a poisonous event a coup of some kind… because you use the word “ preventable “…. So it could be Mother Nature or maybe it’s global warming!…. It has to be something, someone or many did to leave such cold, barren wasteland such as this, where one or many are stunned, lost, and vulnerable… could it be from another planet?..! Or perhaps it’s the desert, dunes that are a wasteland in itself, and one could get lost very easily as direction of sun the only way to find one’s path…. Maybe it’s the higher up who created this wasteland….just some thoughts! Beautiful!
Warmly, B

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

1 Year Ago


I am just the humble messenger but I shall convey all as soon as I get off this cloud .. ble.. read more



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This reminds me of some devastation….. it could be something horrible like a bomb strike, a poisonous event a coup of some kind… because you use the word “ preventable “…. So it could be Mother Nature or maybe it’s global warming!…. It has to be something, someone or many did to leave such cold, barren wasteland such as this, where one or many are stunned, lost, and vulnerable… could it be from another planet?..! Or perhaps it’s the desert, dunes that are a wasteland in itself, and one could get lost very easily as direction of sun the only way to find one’s path…. Maybe it’s the higher up who created this wasteland….just some thoughts! Beautiful!
Warmly, B

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

1 Year Ago


I am just the humble messenger but I shall convey all as soon as I get off this cloud .. ble.. read more

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Added on July 27, 2024
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Neville
Neville

Gone West folks....., United Kingdom



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