Haiku # Woken by Doves

575 just happens to be my lucky number

Haiku # Woken by Doves

 

how lucky we are

how soft, our morning arrives

   

 awoken by doves ..

 

 

Reviews

[Ern M. Yoshimoto]

to be awoken by doves... it's a great image. i take it to mean gratitude for being alive. life is happening right now and how incredible, amazing that is. one ought to wake every morning, and be thankful we are still here. and seize the opportunity to live life to its fullest.

[Neville]

I know the term love is often miss used and likewise overused and abused .. but it kinda fits in with the way your gift of a review just made me feel and I thank you for it .. Neville

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I love how these easy words just can means a lot. I think for me, dove is a great metaphor for love, This feels like to me when you’re waking up with a lover on your side and sun hits to your face, morning kisses and then suddenly the world just became different… and the way you start the day effects how you spent rest of the day. Loved it

[Neville]

You really are very kind .. thank you for such lovely words .. Neville

[Lorry]

Aw man, now I'm gonna be hearing Prince's when doves cry all day!
Well could be worse I suppose, could get an earworm of "hey Macarena!" 😃

[Neville]

Get outa ear .. that's what I say to any earworm that dares bother me .. I once stuck one up my nose as a kid for a bet .. goodness nose where that ended up .. Neville 😎💛👍xx

[Poetic Beauty]

A soft morning being woken by doves sounds like heaven. I am not a morning person so it is best to tread lightly until I’ve had coffee or sex lmao truth but if I got up to this scene it would definitely make me smile

[Neville]

if you ever struggle for zzz's give us shout and I'll pop around and put your kettle on

[Poetic Beauty]

It depends…
Some night I sleep quite soundly and others it broken asleep all night long or waking after only 5 hours of sleep. Quite random really

[Dylan Macadham]

My second visit. Haha, was I wrong about the 3rd line, or did you add a Syll? :)
...Yes, such a morning that would be!

[Neville]

I do so enjoy second helpings .. thanks for taking another peek .. Neville

[Arundass TP]

Beautiful haiku. Loved it as if I see first ray of sun touching my eyes

[Neville]

what a wonderful thing to say .. bless you my friend .. Neville

[Thomas W Case]

Beautiful imagery and so serene.

[Neville]

cheers T .. N 😎👍

[redd Brick Keshner]

……. And Have a great New Year!

[Neville]

cheers mate .. & you .. 😎👍

[Dylan Macadham]

Oops ... 3rd line has 4 sylls.
How about "Woken by a dove" ?
~Haiku Police :))

[Neville]

Thanks for taking a peek .. Neville