Inaudible Sounds

for some reason, I just can't stop listening 🤍

Inaudible Sounds

although I know I am

at least, an equal part of it ..

the silence here,

is quite simply killing me ..

from somewhere deep

within my core ..

I feel like some

kind of wild rotten apple ..

with it scratching

and gnawing at my insides ..

kind of like an earworm,

doing the rounds ..

trying to break free

from some invisible loop ..

yet somehow,

failing magnificently ..

I don’t even know

why I bother to mention it ..

after all, it’s nothing but

a series of inaudible sounds ..

 

Reviews

[Betty Hermelee]

The inaudible sounds that drive you crazy, like you are cooped up in some cage ...it would be better if you could hear the words....It seems like a huge problem you contend with...I think I would go batty myself if I hear inaudible noises and couldn't make out what is being said...."Trying to break free from some invisible loop".... Thank you for sharing this very honest piece....
Warmly, B

[Neville]

thank you for reaching out mid this near darkness that blinds me Betty .. Neville

[Betty Hermelee]

I love to reach out Neville and love your work!🌷🌷🌷🌷🌷

[emmajoygreen]

You'll never be a rotten anything but - one left to the side to feed and inspire others as you have many of us over the years. Inaudible sounds might be counter productive but at least you might smile as you use the phrase.. perhaps! Whatever one loses is both pain and bewilderment.. that 'why me?' syndrome which hurts like blazing red hell even to think, never mind to bring present. God willing the words laid so finely in the past will be eternal. Am sure so, Neville

[Jimmy Crapped Corn]

Sound is the new weapon, I experience some very strange auditory phenomenon for the last 15yrs. Most days anymore they are trying to do harm. Thank you for sharing I never woukd have known

[Thomas W Case]

Tremendous work, my friend.

[Arundass TP]

From silence the tree of creativity flourishes. Embracing silence is bravery. Good poem

[Neville]

thank you for visiting my little scribble my friend and for your ongoing support .. kind regards, Neville

[Soren]

It is the inaudible sounds that speak most loudly. It is them that are a part of us and like that ear worm they won't leave us alone. As for rotten apples they all rot after we eat them. A thought provoking write Neville.

[Neville]

many thanks indeed my friend .. much appreciated ..

[redd Brick Keshner]

Save for the scratching sounds of the earworm’s wriggling along the inaudible can be really loud! 🙏🏻🕊

[Neville]

They get on my wick too .. glad I'm not the only one 👍

[Lorry]

I am the polar opposite Nev and get driven to distraction by anyone breathing too loudly in my vicinity.
I dont quite recall when the party animal inside me died, but i managed to keep the death notice out of tge papers, because all that rustling would have drove me bonkers! 😀

[Neville]

I kinda guessed that Loz .. its why I only tend to whisper n your vague direction these daze .. 😎💛👍xx