Wilderness

Wilderness

A Poem by Neville

Wilderness



There is an unfamiliar feeling


befallen this wilderness


  and I was so hoping for snow ..



It makes me feel hungry


and uncomfortable


  in a full up, empty kind of way ..



I could seriously do with


a touch of frostbite right now


  to feel and to feed off ..



To satisfy this hunger a moment


but doubt, having tasted it,


  it will ever go away or leave me ..

© 2026 Neville


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Your words give me a sense of feeling numb. The wilderness is a huge expanse of the unknown lost. Frostbite as an aid to coming back to normality is novel. The sun works much better in my humble opinion. May your cup runneth over Neville. Emptiness is the pits. Have a great weekend.

Chris💜

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

1 Month Ago


Kindly words indeed our Chris and likewise appreciated .. Neville 💜



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Your words give me a sense of feeling numb. The wilderness is a huge expanse of the unknown lost. Frostbite as an aid to coming back to normality is novel. The sun works much better in my humble opinion. May your cup runneth over Neville. Emptiness is the pits. Have a great weekend.

Chris💜

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

1 Month Ago


Kindly words indeed our Chris and likewise appreciated .. Neville 💜
Hi Neville
to doubt something leaves us in a wilderness kind of feeling...nothing certain about it...i think we'd rather feel, see and breathe a natural wonder than to see nothing....emptiness is not a good feeling...your words tell the whole story quite beautifully... Thank you for sharing
Warmly, B

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

1 Month Ago


My word my lady, I can't thank thee enough ..kind & warmest regards to both you n ya pen .. .. read more
Betty Hermelee

1 Month Ago

My pleasure my friend1
Warmly, B
Neville

1 Month Ago


.................. .. 😎🌻👍

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Added on November 8, 2024
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Neville
Neville

Gone West folks....., United Kingdom



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Sometimes my imagination get's the better of me and then the pen takes over .. more..