The Look

The Look

She looked at him,

then turned

away again fast ..

Like he was

just one more old

man in a

very large crowd ..

But then he

was just another

old man in a

very long row of

standard

issue white metal

hospital beds

and he knew that ..

And as well

as the look that

she gave him

in passing, maybe

it would

have been kinder

and easier

for them both

if she had

just turned away

and not

smiled at him like

that since ..

He knew that look

only too

well perhaps ..

Indeed, it was one

of those

knowingly over

familiar

quasi-flirtatious

yet still

uncomfortable

looks

reserved for all

those on

whom empathy

could not

possibly be wasted ..

He had used it

himself

countless times on

those who

probably hadn’t

that much time left ..

 

 

 

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

This reminds me of how many times now I may see a beautiful woman, inside and out, and think to myself, "If only I were a hundred years younger!"

[Neville]

You don't look too bad at all, under that carapace N

[DIVYA]

This was a gut twisting read. He had given others that look and now it was him being given that look and how he must shiver! Says so much about how life comes a full circle. Time will spare no one. You thrust the blade deep here.

[Neville]

from personal experience, sometime a little twist is all it takes .. bless you .. Neville

[DIVYA]

Aye! And the twist is much appreciated!