Double Checking Our Favourite Positions

Double Checking Our Favourite Positions

 

counting backwards

and down in

reverse alphabetical

order I did note

at that time, we were

   both on letter Z ..

oh’ my word, whatever

next she asked

and where might we go

   from here ..

I don’t have a clue her

   lover replied ..

maybe we ought to try

throwing a dice

or something and take

   it from there,

 before agreeing, on what

   

   feels the most comfortable ..

 

Reviews

[Lorry]

Didn't come up double six, and by double six I am somehow trying to crowbar the word jackpot out of that!
Dice have never been luck for me. Its either go straight to jail or not collecting some much needed bucks, unless you count the time iglued them to an eulers disc, but I won't know how lucky that is until it stops spinning... in about 2036! 😃

[Neville]

If you ever wanna borrow one of my dices with six dots on each side, just give us a nod Loz .. I hardly ever win, I just love living dangerously .. soz for being late getting here I'm just back from the Big Smoke & my head is still spinning like your eulers disk .. You won't believe all the red tape and hoops I had to cut and jump through to try and ease my way back into West Africa with a long wheel base Land Rover .. If I don't get rubber stamped before Spring, I may start thinking about trying somewhere a bit less dodgy .. Yours most sincerely brother .. Neville 😎🐧👍xx

[Lorry]

Bloody beauroc...byoorocracy! 😃

[Neville]

maybe biro-ocracy .. but then I'm feeling a bit pensive mate 🐧💛🐧😎👍xx

[Lorry]

That's a bit of a sketch... I mean stretch! 😃

[Betty Hermelee]

Dear Neville...this is such a cleverly written piece, using the alphabet to form different positions of love-making... and then when you finish the alphabet, the dice-throwing sounds divine... your words are vivid and meaningful...quite romantic in a compatible way.... Lovely
Warmly
B

[Neville]

Bless you Betty & truly .. Thank you so very much and most warmly .. Neville

[Betty Hermelee]

Always a pleasure Neville,
Warmly, B

[Thomas W Case]

Superb work, my friend. Excellent.

[Neville]

many thanks my good man .. 😎👍

[Dylan Macadham]

...sends a mind a-reeling! Don't know from experience, but I imagine it's not E Z, that having exhausted all entwining's, to invent a new alphabet. ...But you can bet I'm gonna stay tuned!😃

[Neville]

Cheers Dylan 😎👍

[Arundass TP]

Interesting work. Enjoyed reading.

[Neville]

thank you friend .. Neville

[Pryde Foltz]

What is that song by Bowie ... modern love.

"There's no sign of life
It's just the power to charm"

[Neville]

Good old DB .. Charmed, I'm sure PF .. N 😉