Some Kind of Curious Something

Some Kind of Curious Something

 

I think it was while we were laying contented,

in two, conjoint heaps on

the top sheet, I first became aware of some kind

of curious something and nothing

   

   that surely must have been us, sated and complete ..

 

 

Reviews

[Lorry]

I really like the title of this one Nev. It speaks to me at my level where I use something to describe anything that lockdown has made me forget, or misremember if you wanna get all political about it. 😃
Plus, sometimes less is more when your mind is in that happy zone where something is apt to describe err, something, rather than download another memory update to find the proper word!
Now, where did I put my thingies! You know, they things that keep your feet warm of a morn! Ach, I'll go make a hot black drink thingy and have a think about it! 😃

[Neville]

It happens to the best of us Loz .. I think it happened to me quite a while back now .. and again more recently .. maybe 😎👍xx

[Chris Shaw]

An awareness I think of being complete with the one you love. Very much in the moment and sensual. Moments to remember and be thankful for. Lovely.

💜

[Neville]

my word, I feel well indulged .. my sincere bless you, hardly feels adequate our Chris 💜

[Buddhistboy73]

Short, yet profound poem here Neville....

This reads like a mini-play of two souls after a sensual evening...sated and complete...

Thanks for sharing this....

BB

[Neville]

Hey BB that is super kind, thanks for stopping by .. Neville

[Betty Hermelee]

Hi Neville... of course it was you..and I'm sure it was something, not nothing.... entwined is the best place to be ...under the sheets where privacy is perfect...and you were completely satiated... love the words...but don't get confused ,you were for sure thinking of how great sensuality can be!
NICE!
Warmly, B

[Neville]

To quote Cher .. You got me babe .. Thank you so very much Betty .. All Good Things, Neville

[Betty Hermelee]

My pleasure
Warmly, B

[Thomas W Case]

That’s a quiet, after-the-storm kind of intimacy—where even the air feels full and shared.
It lingers in that strange space between bodies and meaning, like something real you can’t quite name.

[Neville]

its good to have you around Thomas .. always welcome invariably much appreciated .. Neville