Pretty Skies a Haiku in Flight Mode

Pretty Skies a Haiku in Flight Mode

 

rainbow arcs criss cross

 watercolour puddle skies,

   migrating bird skeins ..

 

Author's Note

taken from the first draft of ' A Nuance for Old Times Sake' .. as yet unpublished

Reviews

[emmajoygreen]

What a suggestion, nudge or - as I like to think of it - Gift. Your words could be an everlasting song.. many thank yous for sharing.

[Neville]

its almost as broad as its long .. or should that read deep .. I'm not at all sure .. but then, that's the thing about haikus isn't it .. all I know is .. I am glad you stopped by here today emmajoygreen .. Neville

[emmajoygreen]

As someone who is hopeless at haikus, yours has inspired me to keep trying. Will see what the future brings!!!

[Beren]

What imagination! Watercolor puddle... And all the other words! You are one of a kind. I loved this so much

[Neville]

How ever so kind .. Oh how I wish you would Google me .. Neville

[Beren]

Are you a serial killer? Why would I Google you? Don't make me panic