Marching on Bone Spurs

Marching on Bone Spurs

A Poem by Neville

Marching on Bone Spurs

 


okay maybe,


if he had just been forced


to march


on his bone spurs for one


   or two years ..


the world today would be,


   a better place ..


where honour, justice, truth


and morality


might still command respect


and retain that


certain something that which


without doubt,

   

once made decent folk proud ..

 

© 2025 Neville


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Could be a very fine poetic testament/tribute to aq former british politician who lead GB through too vivtory during the 2nd world war,both trepid and historic times and the man in question few if any have ever been revered and respected by the nation, none other than Sir Winston Churchill ..

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

4 Months Ago


I had never thought of it like that Tom .. thanks for the thumbs up .. it always amazes me h.. read more
Tom

4 Months Ago

Yes we sing from the same hymn sheet my friend, hope all is well with you across the pond!1
Neville

4 Months Ago


I thought we were on the same side of the Pond Tom but yes, could be worse in fact have been.. read more



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Having bone spurs myself, and plantar fasciitis (which I like to call plantar fascists for the torment it inflicts) I get the unwillingness to push through. We should march on, though. Keep the faith, and recognize how important what we do will be to those who come after. Make the world a better place with your words, my friend. Sometimes that is all we have!

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

3 Months Ago


Ouch .. try n keep ya pecker up Zoe & thanks a minion my friend .. neville with a small N .. read more
Ooooh boy the world is not a better place, Nev. Not one bit. In fact... I'm starting to get the sneaking suspicion there be real b******s about.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

3 Months Ago


You n me both mate .. Cheers, it's good to know I'm not alone .. 😎👍
This was intriguing but I wonder who it was about? Did you intend for me to fill that in for myself as the reader, was this illusive to you as you wrote it, or did it have an intended person who inspired you to write it?

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Could be a very fine poetic testament/tribute to aq former british politician who lead GB through too vivtory during the 2nd world war,both trepid and historic times and the man in question few if any have ever been revered and respected by the nation, none other than Sir Winston Churchill ..

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

4 Months Ago


I had never thought of it like that Tom .. thanks for the thumbs up .. it always amazes me h.. read more
Tom

4 Months Ago

Yes we sing from the same hymn sheet my friend, hope all is well with you across the pond!1
Neville

4 Months Ago


I thought we were on the same side of the Pond Tom but yes, could be worse in fact have been.. read more
I wish someone else would march on his bone spurs if you know what I mean

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

4 Months Ago


I know exactly what you mean .. bless you and I'm so glad we are on the same side my friend .. read more

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Added on August 19, 2025
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Neville

Gone West folks....., United Kingdom



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