Sometimes She Just Cries

contradictions, contraindications & catastrophes in the making .. maybe

Sometimes She Just Cries

 

sometimes, she shouts

 

just get out ..

when she really means

  don’t let go ..

then afterwards, when

the sweat

is gone and the tears

  

have all dried ..

she has on occasion been

known to just cry

   

hey babe now wasn’t that fun ..

 

Author's Note

For all those who might think they are loved but who may have bitten off more than they can safely chew .. Since I would argue, what you might see, hear and or feel, is not always for real, nor is it all that you might eventually get ..

Reviews

[Betty Hermelee]

We certainly do have emotional swings…. Love is not always juicy kisses, it’s complex and sometimes we say or do something that we do t mean but cannot help it; this powerful write is so true to life, loved it!😊🌷
Warmly, B🌷

[Neville]

That'll do nicely Betty .. very nicely indeed .. thank you and truly .. Oh' n warmly tooly .. Neville 😎🌻🌹🥀🌷🌼🌸👍

[Betty Hermelee]

Thank you my friend, always a pleasure!
Warmly, B

[Neville]

................. Bless ya Betty .. 😎💐🌷🌻👍

[RomaJ]

I love the way this poem captures the messy, tender contradictions of intimacy. The push and pull between frustration and longing, anger and care, feels so real..like the quiet truths of human connection distilled into a few lines. Your voice balances humor and empathy beautifully, making the contradictions feel alive rather than chaotic.

[Neville]

You just made a grey Thursday mane in November golden .. Bless you Roma .. Neville 😎👍

[Thomas W Case]

Powerful work, my friend. Well done.

[Neville]

Thank you Thomas .. Neville

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Goshh... So powerful. I felt the rollercoaster and the swift changes so much. It's even better considering your profession and how you explain this situation. So so good, as always!

[Neville]

Many thanks B .. neville with a very humbled small N 😎

[Chris Shaw]

There is an emotional roller coaster going on here Neville in this poem and I am reminded that it always takes two to tango. I wonder what triggers the outbursts in circumstances like these. That last line was a killer. Totally lacks any understanding. We appear to have perhaps emotionally vulnerable people here who need to communicate on a much better level. Maybe it starts with listening. Pushing away, coming together. Contradictions and catastrophes don’t make good bed partners. Well that’s my penny worth thrown in to the arena. I smiled at Lorry’s response. It’s always us blinkin wimmin though who are at fault ain’t it ?:))

Chris

[Neville]

Dealing with a very delicate situation at the mo Chris .. its a good job I'm into personality disorders innit 💜

[Betty Hermelee]

I think those kind of emotions may be real but they are attention getters fir sure… and I do think it’s more of woman thing, not to be sexist….maybe not separate houses but first they separate bedrooms! I really like the scene you describe Neville…🌷🌷🌷
Warmly
B😊

[Neville]

I love the fact you found time to visit and lingered long enough to leave an impression behind .. Bless you & warmly too Betty .. Neville 🌻🌻🌻

[Chris Shaw]

Hope your delicate situation resolves itself quickly Neville and it isn’t one of those that causes your intray to let out a sigh.Maybe a good luck is in order 💜

[Neville]

Good mane our Chris .. unfortunately I don't see an end to the situation I referred to earlier .. Good luck is always welcome tho and I wish it back to you & yours .. Neville 💜

[Lorry]

Dont know why she cried Nev, but I'm 99.976% certain it was your fault, or at least you were to blame in her head.
I've met a few like that, who ask for help and then stand beside you as they criticise the way you do it not being her way. I reckon they're just want to moan at someone else, which is why having separate houses should be compulsory!
Women eh? Can't live with them and that's the end of that statement! 😀

[Neville]

There's a whole lotta truths you just crammed into that little rectangle Loz .. I won't argue tho' no not when I feel like an egg mate and by that I mean beat .. Neville 😎🐧🐧👍xx

[Lorry]

But some of them are just lovely. (Women i mean, not eggs!) 😀

[petec3638]

she shouts when I ignore her wish immediately

Then when it is all done and dustedread moreshe shouts when I ignore her wish immediately

Then when it is all done and dusted
she cries tears of sorrow
because she has created a fuss

But we still love her for who she is

[Neville]

No one likes being ignored do they .. and from personal experience when extinction techniques are employed the undesirable behaviour escalates in the short to mid erm and quite markedly .. Neville

[Prashant Chaitali]

Do you understand why she cries? Please let me know.
And also let me know did you also cry? Why we really afraid of crying, difficulties, bad, worries, negativity etc..? Are they really powerful in front positivity and a beautiful smile? Please ask her/him to small after lot of crying and shouting. If she/he is your partner/wife, please ask her to have some love quality time. I think you must have understand which I can't write openly. I think life is very beautiful to live if we take care of every emotions with love like our children. Please ask her to be proud of her and specially of being as her. I know my English language is bad. But I betcha you understand. You know specially the last sentence "Specially of being as her". I know I am very imaginative even I can't handle this imagination. Anyways next time when she cries ask her to do crying activity with more effort at least for 3 days maybe. I just realized I am again failed to manipulate sadness with happiness. Anyway if you smile please comment below. Thank you for reading my above article. That would be your sentence. My pleasure that would be my scentence.

[Neville]

and I for one, am impressed too .. Neville