Amid The Echo of Doves

I was in two minds whether I should leave it up to you to make your own mind up .. now decided its probably best .. 🤍

Amid The Echo of Doves

Listen

to the echo

of doves

calling

from high

rafters

in these

old derelict

buildings

where I now

reside ..

Their

haunting

song,

a gentle

hymn ..

Bouncing

loud

off the walls

below

both hollow

but yet

still proud ..

It feels

like a trick

of time

just passing

me by ..

Yes, listen

by all means,

but don’t

you dare feel

obliged to

linger

anywhere

here all

on your own ..

With just

the ghost of

me by your side ..

 

Author's Note

This is likely to be my last post for a while as am back off to Miami in a couple of days before hopping on board The Pearl for further exploration of South America & other destinations .. Take care, stay safe and write on .. Neville

Reviews

[Thomas W Case]

This one feels hollow in the right way—abandoned space echoing a living voice. I like how the doves carry the weight, proud but empty, just like the speaker. That last warning lands quiet and sad, like someone who knows when it’s time to leave.

[Neville]

Thanks tons Thomas .. Neville please excuse this long overdue response I got stranded in Newark NJ .. Neville

[Ken Simm.]

An atmospheric write that hits so much with its soft intensity .Haunting and ghost like.
I hope you enjoy your South American adventures. I am sure you will.

[Neville]

Thanks Ken, yes I bloomin well did mate .. the return journey was a bit of a bummer tho' .. Hope you are well on the mend now my friend, I may not have been in touch but have been thinking about you loads .. Neville 😎👍

[Chris Shaw]

A poem which speaks to me of memories. Doves have so much beautiful symbolism. Peace, purity, hope, spirituality, love. Echoes of the past. Your lines have a haunting quality. Best not linger where ghosts reside though, best to concentrate on the living. There is a darkness in the building, that makes this reader want to escape into the light. A lonely place. Very atmospheric Neville. Intriguing poetry. Can be interpreted in several ways. Have a super, duper cruise on the Pearl with your family. You lucky fella:)

Chris 💜 🕊️🕊️👻🍷

[Neville]

I know .. Thank you our Chris .. Setting off @ first light 💜 👍