While These Words May Not Be Perfect

While These Words May Not Be Perfect

A Poem by Neville
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While These Words May Not Be Perfect

 

these words may not be perfect,

but they are my words

  and they are meant just for you ..

I wrote them first thing

  before first light and the dawn hit ..

only moments ahead

of the doves and the blackbirds

in the garden began their

tuning up for a brand new days

rejoicing and recital ..

that was after I kissed your sleepy

forehead and I said

I don’t know how many times that

   I love you too darling ..

  and I meant that, more than anything ..

 

© 2026 Neville


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How perfect is that, just before a new dawn breaks with the morning chorus, to hear such loving words. Your darling is blessed. Tender words and said with conviction. Have a great weekend Neville.
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Neville

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To quote Cher .. You got me Babe .. many thanks our Chris & sentiments well n truly reciproc.. read more

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Added on May 15, 2026
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Neville
Neville

Gone West folks....., United Kingdom



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Sometimes my imagination get's the better of me and then the pen takes over .. more..