Limpid Uncertainty

She realised she was an intruder here,
Yet she chose intransigence.
She's tired now, she might quit....

Reviews

[Dipanjan Dutta]

Amazing...moved...really short of words

Keep writing

[Neytri]

Thank you so much. Glad you liked it :)

[Tom]

Hang in there,it will work out !

Come on India, your much better than those Aussies !! ( T20 cricket World Cup ) !!

[Neytri]

Umm.. Thanks for reviewing. But I strongly believe in equality though. :)

[Tom]

Yes, me too....& congrats to India, now into the semi-final of t20 World Cup !! 😄

[Neytri]

Yeah.. Hope we'll get through :)

[Sarah King]

I don't know if I am right or not.. but i felt the sorrow and hopelessness and I know how it hurts... it was short but still good.

[Neytri]

Thank you

[Asante]

Short and sweet. A beautifully telling piece, plain and simple. Thank you for sharing. :)

[Neytri]

You're welcome and thank you for reviewing..

[Pushkar Prabhat]

WoW!!!
taking a decision or choosing a direction is still easy..........going on.....is the real question...... often times THE real question.........
great write......
i loved it!!!
:)

[Neytri]

I'm glad that you liked it. Thank you :)

[Ruth]

Lovely wording here...maintaining stamina is often tiring, when is enough enough...enjoyed this piece :)

[Neytri]

Thank you so much. :)

[dan]

Feeling as if one does not belong may persuade one the quest to conform but choosing intransigence and refusing to change does indeed give one a sense of pride. Maintaining this outlook can be a bit tiring, but one should never quit the quest to stand out and embrace self. Very nice piece, Neytri. take care...dan

[Neytri]

Thank you so much for reviewing :)

[Azriel]

A beautiful piece, said in just few lines... Hope to see more works like this from you... :)

[Neytri]

Pleasure is mine :)

[Troy Henson]

No matter the journey we walk just remember who you are. These are your steps and no one elses

[Neytri]

Yes, they are our steps indeed... It might seem very difficult to hold on to being ourselves, but its also the most beautiful thing ever. Thank you for reviewing :)

[Avinash]

Everyone who has chosen to remain herself/himself has felt this way one time or another.

[Neytri]

Yeah, right! But the ones who can hold on to who they are, they are the real winners :) Thanks for reviewing

[Avinash]

Bingo... :)