Feast

Lyrics actually, but put up as a poem. Enjoy.

 

 

It hurts so bad
And I've got no way to show
That I'm walking in a strangers town

Walking a road of despair

Have I took the wrong way?

It's not for me to say

 

Oh, it's not for me to say

 

Barrels of dreams ripped open

Feasted on by the vicious

Why did it take so long to see this?

 

Oh, it's not for my to say

There must be another way, another way

 

We spend the days

On what could of been

We couldn't of seen

We couldn't of seen

Objects in our street

We bent over at it's feet

 

Barrels of dreams ripped open

Feasted on by the vicious

Why did it take so long to see this?

 

Oh, it's not for me to say

There must be another way, another way

We hope, we pray.

Reviews

[Zatoichi]

could/couldn't of is incorrect
should be could/couldn't have

i agree with the previous post- this would be a great song. Z

[Jaffa Forbes]

Would be cool to hear this in a song. Good stuff.
Jaff :)

[Lady Lazarus.]

such a gentle sad poem love.
I shed a tear reading.
your way to convey emotion is so powerful and beautiful.
I'm happy to have ever got to know you.