Let Me Go

Let me go

Release me from your curse

Still falling into inky darkness

Twisting curling in mid fall

Stumbling on thorny bushes

Scrapping knees on rough gravel

Tears splattering upon the dying weeds

I surrender whole heartily in you 

Reviews

[Jessica Mai]

Another short and powerful write. The last line really hit me hard! This is a great great great write.

[JENY]

Wow…..
Choice of words really touched me….
Liked it sooooooooo……much…

[Sweet_pale_cacophony]

still falling into inky darkness ...inky darkness was a lovely phrase..