Your Effect

Your Effect

A Poem by Nianque

Your effect is that of morphine

Mind numbing and soul stealing


Dripping from your IV

Into my encased form  


Searing all the way down

What a bitter pill to swallow


Knowing that you won’t allow

My desires to go unchallenged


Screaming in ecstasy and terror

Ashamed 

© 2010 Nianque


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I thought this was nice. Morphine is pretty powerful. It can be very addicting. I loved this though. Thanks for sharing. :)

Posted 15 Years Ago


Morphine is one powerful drug :) Not sure if that love is good for anyone or not but I bet it is all out addictive love. Why ashamed? Just curious. An excellent write.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Love that is like morphine. That is some powerful and good love. The poem is outstanding. Each line create a vision of wild and crazy emotions. A excellent poem. A very good ending. Thank you.
Coyote


Posted 15 Years Ago



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Nianque
Nianque

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Hello, I enjoy reading, drawing, and acting silly. I love my kitties, fishies, and turtle :] . I enjoy challenging myself and think. I've recently began to write again. It feels heavenly. more..