Tired

No I won’t die

As far as the doctors know

I will remain in great pain

Throbbing, crushing, pounding, dashing pain

What gives you the right to tell me

To try harder

Don’t give up

I am not weak nor am I am giving up

I am tired

Of the substances and other people controlling my life

Everyone knows what best for me  

 

But me? 

Author's Note

I'm not sure about this , maybe I 'll change it later. Thank you for your reviews.

Reviews

[Iota]

I use to be in a lot of pain until recently. It got so bad that it broke me down mentally, no relief ever was just too much mentally to deal with. That did help me take a risk at fixing the problem and it worked. Yes keep working on this one you can explore this topic a lot more. Nice job.

[Mikjohns]

I want to make you whole!

[Jessie Sianodel]

"Don't give up!"
"Aw really? Like I actually have to try not to give up? Wow that really sucks, I was just hoping the problem would fix itself. Thank you Sherlock."
Lol I know I shouldn't laugh but this is the perfect moment for sarcasm and I am the sarcasm queen.

And that kitten picture was so cute!

[Coyote Poetry]

Life in the end is our decisions. Sometime people can give advice and we need to listen. Most times we learn by trial and error. I could feel the emotion of disappointment and desire to be free to make your own decisions. A excellent poem.
Coyote