A Place in My Heart for You

Hands reach for mine, 

I look into brown eyes, 

And you comfort me, 

In a troubling time.

You radiate inelegance,

And Bollywood swag,

Every smile you flash, 

Makes my heart go mad.

An essence so comforting,

And a presence so calming,

You make everything so quiet,

In a time so alarming. 

Author's Note

Honesty is key!

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the way you used the description. Create good situation and person. I like the positive tone of the poem. It was polite description with a positive feel. I liked it. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Sami Khalil]

Awesome. I like it a,lot. Thank you for sharing....:)......

[NicholeHemstock]

thank you for reading it!

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:).......

[Jen]

Beautiful small poem and Honest as well!
I liked the lines: "An essence so comforting,
And a presence so calming,
You make everything so quiet,
In a time so alarming."
These lines show perfect emotion...

[NicholeHemstock]

Thank you, those are my favorite lines as well!

[Jen]

welcome (y)

[deleted]

A nice romantic poem....thanks for sharing!

[NicholeHemstock]

Thank you for reading!

[deleted]

Your welcome!

[Aseel]

i liked it very much . I it is usually not easy for me to understand english poem but this one is easy and nice but what you mean by bollywood swag

[NicholeHemstock]

My ex is Indian haha and he had that smile, like he couldve been in a bollywood movie. Perfect teeth haha

[SoulSplatter]

Such a sweet poem! Warms the heart! One thing, did you means to say inelegance? As in he has bad taste? Other then that its a beautiful read!

[NicholeHemstock]

Haha, yes, The guy that this is about, has a very unpolished look when it comes to clothes. And thanks for the review!

[SoulSplatter]

haha gotcha! My pleasure!