Back Alley Jazz

Notes that flow as they follow the funky spit that I did swallow.

when I come upon beats

 that lay like alleyways

leading with legs 

that lash like leather

whipping into an empty courtyard

where wooden pallets knock

a hollow tempo

and 

tap

metallic melody

across dumpster symphonies

that cause a passing pedestrian

to skip swiftly

with the night

Reviews

[Frieda P]

I can dance to it, so that's always a good thing....sounds/reads like Stomp. I wanted it to continue on....

[Astro]

Thanks Frieda, I might still add to it, that was me just getting a brainstorm down.

[Frieda P]

Let me know if you do, I enjoyed this.....

[Astro]

Will do.........

[Laminators Dubai]

and tap!
(applause)
thats a fab!
thanks for sharing this funky beat..^^

[Astro]

Well the beat goes on, or it should once I figure out where to take it. Thanks for the read and review Glitch.

[Astro]

Will probably add to this, I was simply getting it down in the moment.