Warped

Warped into the rush of time.

Running down the sidewalk trying to catch my bus.

Working like a busy little ant.

Going home, only to do it all over again.

 

Warped into this time of misery.

Listening to the cries of children in pain.

Watching as death creeps in the shadows, silently stalking the ones I love.

Feeling the sting of a cool blade against my skin.

 

Warped into another universe.

Parallel to my own. Where the grass is pink and the sky is green.

Another universe where the condemned can hit a 'restart' button and start their lives all over again.

 

Author's Note

This is just an everywhere poem. Lemme know what you think. I'm not too sure whether I wanna keep it or not.. hah.

Reviews

[LeeLee Ryder]

I like the progression...starts w/everyday life,
TO painful memories/thoughts,
TO warping into another universe
I particularly love the last verse
pink & green bookends, aye?
ANd I especially love the last line...
I've been looking for that darn re-start button.. HAHA
LeeWarpLee

[Theresa]

I love this it describes perfectly how you get caught up in life and all that stands out are the things that cause pain. Atleast that is what I get from it. I like the lines:
"Watching as death creeps in the shadows, silently stalking the ones I love.
Feeling the sting of a cool blade against my skin."
I think it is written well and I think it is a keeper.

[deeps]

Emotional filled write here,
Expressed so well, I like the imagery I got with this.
Well stated write!