Grey Skies of Autumn

Through the trees the wind sighs

My feet grow numb as I try to run

But still I rise up

 -Up to grey skies of autumn

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I liked this short poem. Autumn will come and we will find some peace in the cooler days. You said a handful in the short poem. Thank you Nicole for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Lovecraft]

It's okay, the problem being its much too short. You should add at least two more verses. That would likely improve it dramatically.

I do love the title, just add a little more and it could be amazing.

[Nicole Laszlo]

There was actually two more line initially. I changed it for a contest. I'll be changing it back shortly thanks to this. Thank you!

[Lovecraft]

Oh, I was unaware of that.

But do add it back, I'd like to see it as it was initially, lol.