Mama

Inspired by 'Mama' by My Chemical Romance. I wanted to see what I could do with the title Mama since it has the same two letters. Hehe.

More are coming,

They want to feel their rath,

The bottled up anger they've felt

All their lives, not wanting to waste a moment's

Seconds on life before they take your own.

Make a last wish before you die,

The darkness overcoming by the bloodshed

That is to cover your face by just teeth

With sharped edges, a venturous thing

That is to be undiscovered by only your eyes alone.

Now don't let the work be finished
Aready; This is only just the beginning.

Reviews

[Marie]

Very nice.

[Brenda Sue]

Very well written. Wonderfully penned, although a little sad. Great job.

[Jillian Alexis]

Very nice Nicole, yet very sad! You have expressed your' thoughts and feelings very well. This is a well penned write...Hugz...Jillian