Disenchanted Greatness

Haiku

 

Beautiful danger

In a world of fate and twist;

This place is my life.

 

Author's Note

I'm not sure if the title fits, but whatever. Lol.

Reviews

[Sparrow]

Appreciating what you have for what it is is a very rare gift in our short lives. Take everything you can get from this twisted dangerous thrill ride we call life. I was somewhere between loving this piece and writing it off but the more I mull it over the more I like it. Thank you so much for submitting it to my contest, True Talent!

-Sparrow

[Emily Rose]

Once again, great choice of font and you have a really nice statement behind your haiku.

[Rambling Prose]

I think the title suits this Haiku perfectly & it's a beautiful Haiku indeed! For me, the font of choice emphasized the beauty amidst a dangerous world.

~nicely penned~

[maiarusm]

It seems quite interesting, though I felt a bit let down with your last line... I suppose I felt that it wasn't dramatic enough for an ending. But nevertheless, this is a nice piece.

[Steffi]

Nice Haiku.
I like how the last line you said.
"This place is my life"

[Larissa G.]

It isn't a bad poem, it's very easy to understand and it reminds me at least of the drama I have and the fantasies I live by sometimes. :)