The Sunset

For the '6 word stories' contest

 

The sun;

 

It’s shining

 

So brightly...

Reviews

[Tina Kline]

Nice, like the imagery of this piece.

[DiggeyEleven]

Simple and to the point, a nice little piece of imagery for a good poem.

[Ari]

I'm not positive that I like the punctuation for this, but it does make me wonder about the rest of the story. I'm picturing this as a complaint, maybe in some post-apocalyptic world where everything is boiling hot. Just a thought.

[Angel's Lady]

Well, you sure painted a nice enough picture with six words. Good job.

[Writer CW Kirkland]

Nice work in so few words. I like to see writers utilize some of the other formatting tools (i.e., color) to make their writing more interesting. I think it is especially important for a piece with only six words. Thank you for sharing your writing on the Cafe. Best wishes!

[Imperfection]

Says a lot if one wants to read between the lines.

And yet so precise.

Nice write.
I think this is the shortest I've read among the entries. Thanks for entering it into my contest.

[Your Tasty Field Adviso..]

short, to the point, and quite expandable.

[Larissa G.]

So simple a statement few would think it poetry, and yet, it seems to work, especially for the rules of the contest. :)

The uniqueness in form makes this an interesting piece, integrating the word and the image it portrays