The Time We Still Owe

POV of a Guy; for the Inspired by a Lyric contest.

 

I still want to see you

In that sweet silhouette

Of a dress, wanting to

Take you into my arms

And say that I will

Always love you

Forever and ever,

Even when our

Time ends right

Now, right here…

At the red light;

At the head

Collision of

A car crash..

I’m sorry;

I didn’t

Want my

Life ending

This way..

But I will

Still love

You for

As long as

I live…
Even as

A ghost

In your

Beautiful

Green

Eyes.

Author's Note

Did I make it seem like it was at least a POV of a guy?

Also inspired by: I Don't Love You by My Chemical Romance

Reviews

[Alz Alz]

love this... i voted for you in the Flowing Love contest :) 10/10

[Lee E. Powell]

I really liked this. I've read alot of poetry on this site and this one will surely stand out.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

What beautiful and haunting words of such timeless love, the ending was phenomenally touching. Good luck , you got my vote.

[D. Nelson]

this is really good! terrific write, idk if it wa an accident but the way the lines become progressively shorter and shorter gives a feeling like your running out of time which really adds to the effect of the poem

[DarkAngelWriter]

Oh my f*****g God. That was like. Amazing.

(My friend in the background): "I like it. Dude, I like it. Did you tell her I like it? I like it cause...it's...coooool...I like it. Did you tell her? I like it.


I love it. It's perfect.

[Blade & Blood (The ..]

Hmm... yep, that sounds like a guy alright... a really sweet guy. ^^ Nice job with this. It's beautiful. Chock full of words that any woman would want to hear from their one true love. :D

Good luck in that Lyric contest of yours, btw.

Ironically Yours, Blade and Blood