I love the way

True meaning

I love the way you feel
I love the way you see
I love the way you act
It complete our chemistry
My ❤ belongs to you
So hard that no one can touch or
Come through
It's lock
Your hands is the key to fall in love all over
Again
I love the way you feel
I love the way you treat me
I love the way you completed me
Its 12 o clock and our love is still standing strong

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

i like the closing...it implies your speaker does not take such a wonderful thing for granted "Its 12 o clock and our love is still standing strong" i don't think we can ever be tuned in and ready to work at the love we share ... there is always deeper to go ...some editing issues that will smooth out the rhythm a bit ... easy to spot if you give it a go ;)
E.

[Davidgeo]

She forgot some words... like "the".

"some editing issues".... seriously? This would be a pretty good poem if you actually critiqued it. People don't listen to me but they listen to you for some reason.

If I have to get s**t for being blunt people like you should get s**t for being so passive. You contribute less with comments like that... milquetoast ignorable nonsense.

People like you do far more damage to "creative" minds than I ever could. You only pretend to be unselfish as it suits you.

[Nicole_the_poet]

Ok thanks for reading my poem

[Einstein Noodle]

your welcome Nicole ;)
E.