*+ALICE IN WONDERLAND+*

This is a poem about Alice in Wonderland... Well my version of Alice in Wonderland that is... Please review and enjoy. ;3

Hey, let's play a game

Is hide and seek alright?

I always get to be the seeker

Well, just call me Alice then...

I have a friend who has long ears

Yeah, she's a white rabbit

Always running away from me

But that't the whole point of the game, right?

Going to another dimension, I counted

My rabbit friend just went there, cause I heard

Finding her is such a drag

Where could she have gone this time?

Blue frills, black ribbons, white lace

My dress flowed as I was running

It's still whole even though I shrank and grew

As I kept drinking and eating random tea and cakes

I met a pair of twins, they told me a lot of stories

A crazy hare, mad hatter and a mouse?!

They're obsessed with tea and cakes

This, I have to say...

Is one hell of a world

A caterpillar... He sat on a huge mushroom

Smoke came out of his mouth

You don't see that everyday

Then... I must really be dreaming!

Walking through the woods

My feet are seriously killing me

This game is very hard

But, I have to find my friend...

Where is she hiding anyway?!

When I started to sit down

A cat smiled at me up in a tree

She came down and told me

About a palace that was near

In there lived a queen

That was where my rabbit friend was hiding

I followed a path that was white and red

And at the end, I met a bunch of cards

They were painting roses a deep red

I asked them why, and they answered

"If the roses were white, off goes our head!"

I took a brush and gave a hand

But then trumpets suddenly played

All the cards lined up , a path formed

Someone walked up to us,

A woman in a long red dress

She had cold red eyes, like blood

I felt that I would freeze

She stared at the roses and looked at the cards

Then shouted out loud,

"Off with their heads!"

I was standing right in front of her

Not knowing if I should run  or hide

But then I saw what I was looking for

My rabbit friend was beside the girl

I asked myself, "What is happening...?"

I then knew that she was the queen

She invited me to a game

We played with a bunch of swords

Sparring each other to death

I thought I'd lose

I attacked like there was no tomorrow

And she did exactly the same

My rabbit friend was smiling

I glanced and I got my fate

My blood looked like a rose

It flowed on to the ground

To my surprise, I opened my eyes

I was sitting under a shady tree

My little rabbit friend had her head

Lying on me

I thought about my dream, then I smiled

I looked at my hand, I saw a red rose

My finger had a cut

It was bleeding with shining blood

I smiled and thought that

My dream wasn't a dream...

I patted my friends head...

"That was a wonderful game of hide and seek..."

Author's Note

Please tell me what you guys think...
And if there are any errors please tell me...
Thank you very much :3

Reviews

[Rhianne Ney]

Lalalalala, so far I didn't see any errors at all and this embodied the purpose of the main story line of Alice in the Wonderland. Have you read the book though? It was a great one (:

[♪Barklight♪]

that's awsome!

[Nigaiyuki]

Thank you very much >wO....!!!