Unaddressed Letter to My love

This is a poem I wrote for my girlfriend because I wanted her to know how I felt about her, actually this is one of three so far.

Roses stained her cheeks as her beautiful eyes glistened. Oh, how I'd love to shower her with my affection. But I, a lovestruck fool, cannot hope to be graced by her presence, graced by her love.
Beauty is said to be in the eyes of the beholder. If it is then I've seen nothing fairer than that of my sweet flower. If I were not such a child, a love-stricken child, I may have a chance at her heart.
Oh, how foolish I am! To want her love for myself and only for myself. I feel hideous as my heart feels similar to that of a Love Eater! But still I wish for her, like a helpless puppy who longs for her master's love, I wish for her.
Please forgive me, my love, my sweet darling. Forgive me for falling for you, falling as an angel would for their human love. Oh, how I'd cry tears of such sweet joy to know my love was not unrequited as I believe.
Je suis désolé, ma chérie, je suis désolé. Je suis désolé, mais je t'aime tellement. Je t'aimerai toujours, ma belle fleur, toujours.

Reviews

[GlacialStars]

O.o OK I'm convinced. You are an awesome French poet. Not only was it beautiful and heartwarming but the touch of French made it personal and as they say French is the language of love and the change of language is dramatic and improves the flow and the rhythm of the whole poem. Dude high five xD! -virtual highfive-

[Alice Walker]

Merci beaucoup, mon ami. I've actually been learning French in school so it's not my first language, actually English is my first language. And I sincerely thank you for your praise. -highfives back-

[GlacialStars]

Ah xD you are very convincing though

[Alice Walker]

Thank you! I used French because my love, Katja, likes to see what I know in different languages.

[GlacialStars]

Ah! She's lucky to have you. You are so kind with words

[Alice Walker]

No, I'm the lucky one to have her because she's the one who makes me open up. I only tell the truth about her.

[GlacialStars]

Awwws xD you are making me go in mushy mode which really compromises my masculinity.

[Alice Walker]

I'm sorry! I don't mean to make you go into mushy mode....exactly..... But she's the light of my life because she's the only one who completely broke into my heart.

[GlacialStars]

I understand the feeling and congrats on that one...its hard to find that and no worries I was only kidding albeit I do feel a little less manly...T___T

[Alice Walker]

Thank you again as it means a lot to know people like my poetry besides Katja. And I'm sorry for making you feel a little less manly. XD

[GlacialStars]

Haha no prob and its okay xP

[KatDarkness]

Elegant and beautifully dramatic :)