Love.

A Six-Word Story

Eyes flicker awake.
Smiling.
"My Love."

Reviews

[Raylene]

I understand its supposed to be short yet it feels.. like something is missing. I however do like the piece yet its just a tad to leaving if you are going to write something short try using more powerful words to say all that you want. though good work just needs tweaking

[Weeping willow]

Beautiful thoughts in expressions of love;-]

[Philip Muls]

A powerful poem. Title says it all.

Intriguing...who is smiling?

[Zoli Fern]

Well, it's all up for debate and interpretation, but I was imagining it was the speaker... But who knows?

[Kaliope]

A moment, a sentiment, a story. Well done, not an easy task :-)

[M. L. F.]

I like it Zoli! It is a talent to do this for sure. I am way too wordy to accomplish the feat of a six word story, but you pulled it off. It makes me have memories of happy times in the beginning of love. Nicely done...
...Misty